WEEK 5 周五阅读《Special Birthday Celebrations》判卷分析
一、总体情况
本次为高思(周计划)英语阅读 WEEK 5 FRIDAY 篇目《Special Birthday Celebrations》(记叙文,158 词,难度 3 级),共 2 页,含阅读理解选择题 4 题、词形填空 6 题、句型转换 5 题。逐像素核验原页无红笔批改(红色均为印刷页码与栏目装饰),本报告为自主判卷。
学生在短文阅读环节表现很好:surgeries、developmental、invitations、replied、showed up、grateful 等关键词都做了下划线标注,"Gerald and his family were very sad" 等关键句也划了线——阅读理解的习惯已经养成。但落笔环节失分严重,尤其是句型转换部分(5 题错 4)。
| 板块 | 题量 | 对 / 错 | 小结 |
|---|---|---|---|
| I. 阅读理解选择 | 4 | 3 / 1(Q1 漏作答) | Q2–Q4 全对,且 Q3 选 D 需要区分父母在文中的两处行为,有见地 |
| II. 词形填空 | 6 | 4 / 2 | 前 3 题(unhappy / playing / sadness)全对,后 3 题错 2 |
| III. 句型转换 | 5 | 1 / 4(III.1 漏作答) | 本次失分重灾区 |
二、错题订正(7 处)
1. I-1 阅读理解 · 漏作答
Why did Gerald have some developmental problems? 题号旁只画了一个弧形记号,未写答案字母。
正确答案 D——Because he had a series of brain surgeries after he was born.(短文第 2 句原话)。定位题其实已经划了 surgeries,差最后一步把答案写出来。
2. II-4 decorating → decoration
My mother bought a large bunch of flowers for table ______. (decorate)
学生填 decorating;for table decoration 用名词(桌花装饰)。「介词 + 名词」结构里给动词要优先考虑名词形式。
3. II-5 invitations → invited
Readers are ______ to write in with their comments. (invitation)
学生填 invitations;应为 invited——「读者被邀请来提意见」,are 后接过去分词构成被动语态 be invited to do。把名词硬塞进被动句位是本题错因。
4. III-1 同义句 · 漏作答
He had a series of brain surgeries after he was born.(保持句意基本不变)He had a series of brain surgeries ______ ______.
两空全空未写。应填 after birth(出生之后)。after he was born = after birth,时间状语从句压缩为介词短语。
5. III-2 反意疑问句 doesn't it → haven't they
The surgeries have left him with some developmental problems.(改为反意疑问句)
学生填 doesn't it;应为 haven't they——①陈述部分是现在完成时(have left),尾句沿用 have;②surgeries 是复数,代词用 they。两个点各丢一半:时态照抄谓语助动词 + 单复数看主语。
6. III-3 同义句 too...those → so...that
All of them said that Gerald was "too different for their kids to play with".(保持句意基本不变)→ "______ different ______ their kids can't play with him".
学生填 too / those;应为 so different that。too...to(太…而不能,不定式)改写为 so...that(如此…以至于,从句)是固定互转公式:后句出现完整从句 can't play with him(有主语有谓语)时必须用 that。第二个空填 those 是把「照抄原词」当成了同义转换。
7. III-5 连词成句 · 语序错 + 漏 class
too, in front of, the boy, shy, is, give, the whole class, to, a speech(连词成句)
学生写 The boy in front of the whole is too shy to give a speech(bey 自改为 boy ✓)。两处问题:①「the whole」后漏了 class(词条是 the whole class 整体);②in front of the whole class 应放在 a speech 之后——正确句序 The boy is too shy to give a speech in front of the whole class.(男孩太腼腆,不敢在全班面前演讲)。too...to 结构里地点状语挂在句尾,不要插在主语后面。
三、答对的亮点
| 题 | 情况 |
|---|---|
| I-2 | A(12)✓ —— 30 张请柬、12 人回复会来,读数准确 |
| I-3 | D ✓ ——「家长不想让孩子和 Gerald 玩」,能区分家长在文中的两处行为(前段拒绝 / 后段邻里送礼物的是 many people 而非家长),判断准确 |
| I-4 | B ✓ —— NOT true 题找出「家人很生气」(文中是 very sad),细节核对到位 |
| II-1~3 | unhappy / playing / sadness ✓ —— unhappy 否定前缀、be good at + 动名词、a great + 名词 sadness,前 3 题词形全对 |
| II-6 | difference ✓ —— the difference between right and wrong 拼写正确 |
| III-4 | How sad ✓ —— 感叹句 How + adj + 主谓 结构正确 |
另外:短文阅读时的关键词下划线习惯(surgeries / developmental / invitations / replied / showed up / grateful / 关键句)保持得很好,值得表扬。
四、未掌握知识点与对策
| # | 薄弱点 | 证据 | 对策 |
|---|---|---|---|
| 1 | 同义句转换:so...that 与 too...to 互转 | III-3 填 too/those | 背口诀「从句用 so...that,不定式用 too...to」;后句有完整主谓就用 that。本周练 5 句互转 |
| 2 | 反意疑问句:时态与主语照应 | III-2 填 doesn't it | 三步:看谓语助动词(have→haven't)→ 看主语单复数(surgeries→they)→ 前肯后否。集中练 8 句 |
| 3 | 词形转换:名词/被动分词的语境选择 | II-4 decorating、II-5 invitations | for + 名词表用途;be + 过去分词表被动。给词是动词时先判断句位缺什么成分 |
| 4 | 漏作答(Q1、III-1 两处空白) | 题号旁只有记号、横线全空 | 做完回看:题号旁有记号=必须落字母;横线空=没写完。全卷完成后再查一遍空白处 |
| 5 | 连词成句:状语位置 | III-5 把 in front of... 插在主语后、漏 class | 先找主谓(The boy is),too...to 挂在谓语后,长状语放句尾;词组(the whole class)圈成一个整体不许拆 |
整体看:阅读与词形的基础题(II 前 3 题 + difference)全部拿稳,失分集中在「句子的组装与变形」这一层——同义句公式、反意疑问规则、状语位置都是可以短期突击的规则性失分,两周内可清零;漏作答属于考试习惯问题,用「空白扫描」一步即可堵住。
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